1) You said, "...when they placed scent in certain shoeses.."
You should say, "...when they placed a scent in certain shoes..."
What's SHOESES??? (:P)
2) You said, "...even though there are exactly same with another shes that does not have smell.."
You should say, " ...even though THEY are exactly the same shoes as those that don't have a scent in them.."
NOTE: The first problem I picked out was not as big a deal as the second, which causes more listener effort. It may be enough to bring you down from a 4 to a 3 so try to clean up your grammar a bit on this one.
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Nice job on this. A few problems I heard:
1) You said, "...when they placed scent in certain shoeses.."
You should say, "...when they placed a scent in certain shoes..."
What's SHOESES??? (:P)
2) You said, "...even though there are exactly same with another shes that does not have smell.."
You should say, " ...even though THEY are exactly the same shoes as those that don't have a scent in them.."
NOTE: The first problem I picked out was not as big a deal as the second, which causes more listener effort. It may be enough to bring you down from a 4 to a 3 so try to clean up your grammar a bit on this one.
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